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the main idea of the text and talk are about a sailor is heard a noise underwater of a submarine from Russian in the Arctic ocean.

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the main idea of the text and talk are about a sailor is heard a noise underwater of a submarine from Russian in the Arctic ocean. the reading states that the submarine is not able to detect any solid object underwater. the lecturer finds the evidence is strong and the critic's opinion is not convincing. firstly. the reading says that this area is living Orca whales. when the female whale trying to attracts a man whale by the bizarre noise. In contrast, the lecturer mentions that this kind of whale ultimately high noise and they live surface of the water for finding them not in deep of the water. Secondly, it was mentioned in the reading another theory is about Giant squids that live deep in the ocean, but the squids have soft bodies without any skeleton, and is a smart animal for emitted its sound of the submarine. While, the lecturer denies it, saying that Giant squids lived in 2 decades ago and no reason it lives today. finally, the author argues that there is a military technology that makes secretly sound for foreign submarines. on the other hand, the lecturer refutes this idea this sound from military technology is fast and silent. and also submarines drive slower than this technology.
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of the text and talk are about a sailor
is heard
a noise underwater of a
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submarine
from Russian in the
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Arctic ocean
.
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the
reading states that the
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submarine
is not able to detect any solid object underwater.
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the
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firstly
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the
reading says that this area is living Orca
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whales
.
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when
the female
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whale
trying to
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attracts
a
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man
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whale
by the bizarre noise.
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, the
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lecturer
mentions that this kind of
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whale
ultimately
high
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noise and
they
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live
surface of the water for finding them not in deep of the water.
Secondly
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in the reading another theory is about Giant squids that
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live
deep in the ocean,
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the squids have soft bodies without any skeleton, and is a smart animal for emitted its sound of the
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submarine
. While, the
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lecturer
denies it, saying that Giant squids
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lived
in 2 decades ago and no reason it
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lives
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today
.
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finally
, the author argues that there is a military technology that
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makes
secretly
sound for foreign
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submarines
.
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on
the other hand, the
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lecturer
refutes this
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idea
this sound from military technology is
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fast
and silent.
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and
also
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submarines
drive slower than this technology.
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IELTS essay the main idea of the text and talk are about a sailor is heard a noise underwater of a submarine from Russian in the Arctic ocean.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
212 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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