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The linear plot depicts standard output of Carbon Dioxide by metric tones discharge per individual per individual in the European countries over fort-year period.

It can clearly be seen that the emissions of carbon acidic gas in United Kingdom and Sweden started with elevated amount of the stated ratio. But toward the end of the period they witnessed a decline. Meanwhile the two territories named Italy and Portugal began with relatively low proportion, it just describe that per person in these countries manage to abase the needed amount of the data. However they saw considerable increases by the end of the timeframe.

It can clearly
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the emissions of carbon acidic gas A determiner is probably missing here: “in the United Kingdom”.in the United Kingdom
in United Kingdom
 and Sweden This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 with elevated amount of the stated ratio. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 toward the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period they witnessed a decline. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Meanwhile,
Meanwhile
 the two territories named Italy and Portugal began with relatively
 low proportion, it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
After ‘it’, use the third-person verb form “describes”.describes
describe
 that per person in these countries manage to abase the needed amount of the data. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 considerable increases by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the timeframe. 