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The linear plot depicts standard output of Carbon Dioxide by metric tones discharge per individual per individual in the European countries over fort-year period.

It can clearly be seen that the emissions of carbon acidic gas in United Kingdom and Sweden started with elevated amount of the stated ratio. But toward the end of the period they witnessed a decline. Meanwhile the two territories named Italy and Portugal began with relatively low proportion, it just describe that per person in these countries manage to abase the needed amount of the data. However they saw considerable increases by the end of the timeframe.
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clearly
be
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seen
that the emissions of carbon acidic gas
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in United Kingdom
and Sweden
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started
with elevated amount of the stated ratio.
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But
toward the
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end
of the period they witnessed a decline.
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Meanwhile
the two territories named Italy and Portugal began with
relatively
low proportion, it
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just
After ‘it’, use the third-person verb form “describes”.
describe
that per person in these countries manage to abase the needed amount of the data.
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However
they
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saw
considerable increases by the
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end
of the timeframe.

IELTS essay The linear plot depicts standard output of Carbon Dioxide by metric tones discharge per individual per individual in the European countries over fort-year period.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
78 words
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