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The level of noise around us in contemporary increasing and is affecting the quality of our levels but this was what should be done about

The level of noise around us in contemporary increasing and is affecting the quality of our levels but this was what should be done about gbMBd
Saturn in the modern era there are many people found that the level of noise around us is constantly increasing day by day after that a factor in the quality of all but I explain in the upcoming paragraphs to begin with there are many organised and present day by apart from these people take care of vehicles becauseon the other hand government should be equal masses follow the rules there are many people affected of health they have to take care of health onlyon the other hand government made these rules many people psychological health related more and more organised on the top of that there are message they do not use tweeter speakers used in the noise around to conclude government should take care of noise around us in the contemporary there are people 12 floor then government should be banned
Saturn in the modern era there are
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made these
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psychological health related more and more
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on the top of that there are
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IELTS essay The level of noise around us in contemporary increasing and is affecting the quality of our levels but this was what should be done about

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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