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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The knowledge we gain from personal experiences is more valuable than the knowledge we gain from books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples .

The knowledge we gain from personal experiences is more valuable than the knowledge we gain from books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples. jROVM
At the current time we have a lot of ways to learn about the world that we live in. From the point of my view, I believe that our personal experience gives us more opportunities to learn more easily rather than reading books. There are valid opinions and examples in the following essay which I will now consider. First of all, some people believe that learning through personal skill can be more effective than learning through books. For example, a person who wants to learn driving a car he/she can go auto schools for getting theoretical and practical lessons from professionals. As a result, practical grasp can give more benefit while driving a car. Second of all, some people think that theoretical know-how is important for every human being, however, at the same time we need to combine this wisdom with our own experiences. Moreover, theoretical proficiency would not be useful unless if we practise it. For example, when I was studying IELTS, I was reading tons of books related to writing. However, I made a lot of mistakes, especially in task 2, even I read a lot of books. I did not find my weakness points until I made mistakes in that task. Hence, I could overcome them and improve my writing skills by practice as you see. In conclusion, as we know education can be gained both by reading books and by participation, but I strongly believe that judgment gained through training would be more beneficial and useful for us.
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time we have
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a lot of
ways to learn about the world that we
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live
in. From the point of my view, I believe that our personal experience gives us more opportunities to learn more
easily
rather
than reading
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books
. There are valid opinions and examples in the following essay which I will
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now
consider.

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First of all
,
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some
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people
believe that learning through personal
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skill
can be more effective than learning through
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
.
For example
, a person who wants to learn driving a car he/she can go auto schools for getting theoretical and practical lessons from professionals.
As a result
, practical grasp can give more benefit while driving a car.

Second of all,
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some
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people
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think
that theoretical know-how is
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important
for every human being,
however
, at the same time we need to combine this wisdom with our
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own
experiences.
Moreover
, theoretical proficiency would not be useful unless if we
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practise
it.
For example
, when I was studying IELTS, I was reading tons of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
related to writing.
However
, I made
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a lot of
mistakes,
especially
in task 2, even I read
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a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
. I did not find my weakness points until I made mistakes in that task.
Hence
, I could overcome them and
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improve
my writing
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skills
by practice as you
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see
.

In conclusion
, as we know education can
be gained
both by reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and by participation,
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but
I
strongly
believe that judgment gained through training would be more beneficial and useful for us.

IELTS essay The knowledge we gain from personal experiences is more valuable than the knowledge we gain from books. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do not use memorized examples.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
252 words
8.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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