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The invention of computer and electronic gadgets are increasing due to which printing books, magazines and newspapers are not necessary. Do you agree or disagree?

The invention of computer and electronic gadgets are increasing due to which printing books, magazines and newspapers are not necessary. r82Nl
In the world, we can see many things inventing, which we can not believe it. Because of this, the old style, traditional things are disappearing. On the other hand, nowadays modernity have made us so easy. For example, we can see world by sitting into the one room. So, I totally agree this statement instead of wasting time using books, magazines and newspapers let's invest our time in the using modern technology.
In the world, we can
see
many
things inventing, which we can not believe it.
Because of this
, the
old
style, traditional things are disappearing.
On the other hand
, nowadays modernity have made us
so
easy.
For example
, we can
see
world by sitting into the one room.
So
, I
totally
agree
this statement
instead
of wasting time using books, magazines and newspapers
let
's invest our time in the using modern technology.
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IELTS essay The invention of computer and electronic gadgets are increasing due to which printing books, magazines and newspapers are not necessary.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
72 words
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