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Air pollution is becoming an alarming issue. Some people suggest that the only way to deal with the situation is to ban air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Air pollution is becoming an alarming issue. Some people suggest that the only way to deal with the situation is to ban air travel. 85j7m
TIn today's world, air pollution becomes a global environmental crisis. Some people opine that prohibiting air travel the only measure to tackle air pollution. In my opinion, I agree with the suggestion. First, it is clear that flying is the most damaging way to travel for the atmosphere. Airplanes are proved to be responsible for a high percentage of air pollutants. A number of aircrafts will take a lot of energy to take off, fly and land; therefore, they exhaust a huge amount of carbon dioxide emissions to the atmosphere everyday. Second, it is true that air travel lead to global warming. Air travelling not only releases carbon dioxide but also affects in a variety of more complex ways. Airplane requires an enormous amount of fossil fuel. As a consequence, the process of combustion of fossil fuels is influence on the concentration of gases in the atmosphere that can make the atmosphere become warmer. However, air travelling is not the only cause of air pollution. Many means of transport using fossil fuel such as car or train causes as much pollution. Therefore, restricting air travel cannot reduce the air pollution and make air quality improve. In conclusion, air travelling lead to air pollution by a huge amount of air pollutant emission. A best solution is using the green source of fuel in airline.
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pollution
becomes a global environmental crisis.
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people
opine that prohibiting
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air
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travel
the
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only
measure to tackle
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air
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pollution
. In my opinion, I
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agree
with the suggestion.

First
, it is
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clear
that flying is the most damaging way to
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travel
for the
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atmosphere
. Airplanes
are proved
to be responsible for a high percentage of
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air
pollutants. A number of
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aircrafts will
take
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a lot of
energy to take off,
fly
and land;
therefore
, they exhaust a huge amount of carbon dioxide emissions to the
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atmosphere
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everyday
.

Second, it is true that
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air
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travel
lead to global warming.
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Air
travelling not
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only
releases carbon dioxide
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also
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fuel
. As a consequence, the process of combustion of fossil
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fuels
is influence on the concentration of gases in the
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atmosphere
that can
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make
the
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atmosphere
become warmer.

However
,
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air
travelling is not the
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only
cause of
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air
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pollution
.
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Many
means of transport using fossil
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fuel
such as car or train causes as much
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pollution
.
Therefore
, restricting
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air
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travel
cannot
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reduce
the
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air
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pollution
and
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make
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air
quality
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improve
.

In conclusion
,
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air
travelling lead to
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air
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pollution
by a huge amount of
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air
pollutant emission.
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A
best solution is using the green source of
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fuel
in airline.
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IELTS essay Air pollution is becoming an alarming issue. Some people suggest that the only way to deal with the situation is to ban air travel.

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