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"The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools." How far do you agree with this prediction?

"The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. " How far do you agree with this prediction? geyd
Nowadays already Internet take places along with book at the same level. However, in my opinion, Internet will never substitute the books at data-gathering as the best source. Firstly, paperbooks always have been actually relevant for students' self-study learning process, also, at the teacher-led learning. Because of imagination becomes stronger rather than to get information from the internet when we study from books. For example, books are further reliable for sift information between sources. This also enhances pupils' study analyzing skills, thus I consider that course books everytime will be on the agenda for desciples' academic achievements. At the same time, moreover learners might be use from internet to distance learning, for instance, if disciples suffer from costs/time of ways, they can study without going anywhere. In conclusion, learners have to understand and analyse that, when they need to internet datas, when course books.
Nowadays already Internet take places along with
book
at the same level.
However
, in my opinion, Internet will never substitute the
books
at data-gathering as the best source.

Firstly
,
paperbooks
always have been actually relevant for students' self-study learning process,
also
, at the teacher-led learning.
Because
of imagination becomes stronger
rather
than to
get
information from the internet when we study from
books
.
For example
,
books
are
further
reliable for sift information between sources. This
also
enhances pupils' study analyzing
skills
,
thus
I consider that course
books
everytime
will be on the agenda for
desciples
' academic achievements.

At the same time,
moreover
learners might be
use
from internet to distance learning,
for instance
, if disciples suffer from costs/time of ways, they can study without going anywhere.

In conclusion
, learners
have to
understand and
analyse
that, when they need to internet
datas
, when course
books
.
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IELTS essay "The Internet will never replace traditional course books in schools. " How far do you agree with this prediction?

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