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The internet is a good source of information and opened up opportunities for people all over the world. Is all information reliable online? What could be done to control information online? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The internet is a good source of information and opened up opportunities for people all over the world. Is all information reliable online? What could be done to control information online? 011B
It is unquestionable that internet is a wonderful way for a business, entertainment, leaning and also an easy tool to communicate with people around the world. Although it can also be a problem such as fake news, cyber-theft and so on. Due to this, is paramount be aware of what information is sharing even more if the source is reliable. Nowadays, is easier to communicate and share news to all over the world by using internet. It has an immense power of having a lot of information circulating from different devices and people all over the world, but is paramount to be careful of which information is reliable or not. For instance, fake news is one of the troubles given by internet. YouTube platform is an example of social media which have been using by many people to spread their ideas and sometime teaching their believes without enough knowledge to it. Conversely, to avoid those issues is crucial be aware of which source is trustworthy. Not only this, but also the technology department of the government should control the reliability of the information available over the internet. Taking control of checking all content before it is posted and give penalties if someone share an incorrect and wrong facts. To conclude, I believe that internet presents a huge advantage to the world. However, people need to be conscious that not every source from it is reliable.
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an easy tool to communicate with
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people
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. Although it can
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on. Due to this, is paramount be aware of what
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information
is sharing even more if the source is reliable.

Nowadays, is easier to communicate and share news to all over the
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world
by using internet. It has an immense power of having
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a lot of
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information
circulating from
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different
devices and
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people
all over the
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world
,
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is paramount to be careful of which
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information
is reliable or not.
For instance
, fake news is one of the troubles
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given
by internet. YouTube platform is an example of social media which have been using by
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many
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people
to spread their
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ideas
and sometime teaching their
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believes
without
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enough
knowledge to it.

Conversely
, to avoid those issues is crucial be aware of which source is trustworthy. Not
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only
this,
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but
also
the technology department of the
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government
should control the reliability of the
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information
available over the internet. Taking control of checking all content
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before
it
is posted
and give penalties if someone
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share
an incorrect and
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wrong
facts.

To conclude
, I believe that internet presents a huge advantage to the
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world
.
However
,
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people
need to be conscious that not every source from it is reliable.

IELTS essay The internet is a good source of information and opened up opportunities for people all over the world. Is all information reliable online? What could be done to control information online?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
235 words
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