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Role of Extra-curricular activities in a student's life

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There's no doubt that extra-curicular activities play a significant role in a student's life and all work and no play, makes Jack a dull boy. Studies are vital and so are extra-curicular activities. In order to understand the importance of these activities, let's take a closer look at them. To begin with, extra-curiculars are defined as those activities that are performed outside the classroom, not pertaining to the regular curiculum. There are a plethora of activities ranging from debate and painting clubs to music and sports clubs. The best part about them is that they are not forced upon students and each pupil gets a choice to choose any of them as per their interest. For instance, many with an inclination towards arts, join painting clubs while other who love cricket or badminton, join sports clubs. Moreover, these activities break the monotony of a classroom and refresh the students as they get to learn new things by pushing their creative envelopes. Not all students are good at studies but it does not mean they are not good at painting or sports. And these activites, add new meaning to their lives by teaching them about time management, discipline, sportsmanship and etc. There are many examples of people who have accomplished a lot through these activities. For instance, the world known cricketing legend, Sachin tendulkar failed in 10th standard but has won the hearts of many through his batting performance. Even the famous musician Bryan Adams who was not a academic topper became a pop sensation by following his creative passion. To conclude, To conclude, the extra-curicular activities should be promoted among students to make them multi-talented as they give them a number of career avenues. Also, make them a better human being.
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activities
play a significant role in a student's life and all work and no play,
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makes
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are
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extra-curicular
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activities
. In order to understand the importance of these
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,
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's take a closer look at them.

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extra-curiculars
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activities
that
are performed
outside the classroom, not pertaining to the regular
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curiculum
. There are a plethora of
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activities
ranging from debate and painting clubs to music and sports clubs. The best part about them is that they are not forced upon
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students
and each pupil
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gets
a choice to choose any of them as per their interest.
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many
with an inclination towards arts,
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join
painting clubs while other who
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love
cricket or badminton,
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join
sports clubs.

Moreover
, these
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activities
break the monotony of a classroom and refresh the
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students
as they
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get
to learn new things by pushing their creative envelopes. Not all
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students
are
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good
at studies
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it does not mean they are not
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at painting or sports. And these
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new meaning to their
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lives
by teaching them about time management, discipline, sportsmanship
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examples of
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people
who have accomplished a lot through these
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.
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, the world known cricketing legend,
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Sachin
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tendulkar
failed in 10th standard
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but
has won the hearts of
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many
through his batting performance. Even the
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famous
musician Bryan Adams who was not
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a
academic topper became a pop sensation by following his creative passion.

To conclude
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should
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among
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students
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make
them multi-talented as they give them a number of career avenues.
Also
,
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make
them a better human being.
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IELTS essay Role of Extra-curricular activities in a student's life

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
291 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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