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The International political changes on the Syrian case and the confrontation effort

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Ten years passed since the Syrian revolution began, which had the most violent conflict in the current century, using chemical weapons, targeting the civilians, schools and hospitals be Al Assad regime. Hundreds of political statements around the world accused the Assad regime of committing war crimes and announced their position against it. Dozens of international reports have documented the violations that occurred in Syria, and dozens of resolutions have called on this regime to engage in a political process based on steps that would stop the crisis but, Is the international community Serious in its position vis-a-vis the Syrian crisis, or could it change its positions or reverse its policies if its political interests changed, even if these changes affect the Syrians and continued their suffering?
Ten years passed since the Syrian revolution began, which had the most violent conflict in the
current
century, using chemical weapons, targeting the civilians, schools and hospitals be Al Assad regime.

Hundreds of political statements around the world accused the Assad regime of committing war crimes and announced their position against it.

Dozens of international reports have documented the violations that occurred in Syria, and dozens of resolutions have called on this regime to engage in a political process based on steps that would
stop
the crisis

but
, Is the international community Serious in its position
vis-a-vis
the Syrian crisis, or could it
change
its positions or reverse its policies if its political interests
changed
, even if these
changes
affect the Syrians and continued their suffering?
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IELTS essay The International political changes on the Syrian case and the confrontation effort

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