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The image provides information about the production of electricity from geothermal energy in a geothermal power plant.

The image provides information about the production of electricity from geothermal energy in a geothermal power plant. 8gYGk

The image provides information about the production of electricity from geothermal energy in a geothermal power plant. The process which occurs in the ground prepares what happens on the surface where a condenser, a turbine, a generator and a grid are located. The first step consists of pumping water (H2O) at a low temperature beneath the soil at a depth of 4. 5 kilometres. Cold water reaches a hot area by flowing through an injection well and then rises hotter than descending water because it has been heated in contact with hot rocks situated in the geothermal zone. As it enters a container, H2O changes into steam which sets a turbine in motion creating energy that is finally distributed through a grid. To sum up, while in the lithosphere simple and natural tools are present, on its surface expensive pieces of equipment are necessary to convert kinetic energy (movements of a turbine due to steam) into electricity.

The image provides information about the production of electricity from geothermal energy in a geothermal power plant. The process which occurs in the ground prepares what happens on the surface where a condenser, a turbine, a generator and a grid are located
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Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
first
 step consists of pumping water (H2O) at a low temperature beneath the soil at a depth of 4. 5 Possible spelling mistake. 'kilometres' is British English.kilometers
kilometres
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
Cold
 water reaches a hot area by flowing through an injection well and then rises hotter than descending water This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it has been heated
 in contact with hot rocks situated in the geothermal zone. As it enters a container, H2O This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 into steam which sets a turbine in motion creating energy that is
finally
 distributed through a grid.

To sum up, while in the lithosphere simple and natural tools are present, on its surface expensive pieces of equipment are necessary to convert kinetic energy (movements of a turbine due to steam) into electricity. 