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the idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. the new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further educatio will be something that continues throughout life.

Being an employee now a days is not enough adnd lot of people have two or more jobs other's have their own business while being employed. The main reason for this is the continous increased in commodity and of peoples change in way of life. Your current salary as an employee maybe sufficientnow but as times past it will now. Your rent will increase, price of food and other thimgs will increase and it will not be enough. Plus the fact that you should also have your own savings that you could use for your retirement. and in order to do that you have to find other sources of income like owning your own business or getting part-time job. Other people opt to study again in the hope that they will be promoted into higher position that could provide them with a higher salary.
Being an employee
now a days
is not
enough
adnd
lot of
people
have two or more jobs other's have their
own
business while
being employed
. The main reason for this is the
continous
increased in commodity and of peoples
change
in way of life. Your
current
salary as an employee maybe
sufficientnow
but
as times past it will
now
. Your rent will increase, price of food and other
thimgs
will increase and it will not be
enough
. Plus the fact that you should
also
have your
own
savings that you could
use
for your retirement.
and
in order to do that you
have to
find other sources of income like owning your
own
business or getting part-time job. Other
people
opt to study again in the hope that they will
be promoted
into higher position that could provide them with a higher salary.
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IELTS essay the idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. the new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further educatio will be something that continues throughout life.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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