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The greenhouse effect is one of the most heated topic of modern society What are the main problems it causes And what are the solutions for it v.2

The greenhouse effect is one of the most heated topic of modern society What are the main problems it causes And what are the solutions for it v. 2
The greenhouse effect has been becoming an ever-increasingly prevalent cause of concern for people around the world. Consequently, some people are apprehensive about the negative influence of it. This essay will illustrate the leading impact of it before moving on to the corresponding remedies. Not only has the greenhouse effect threaten the existence of many species, but also interfered with/posed threats to modern society. In fact, global warming caused by the greenhouse effect has molten wide ranges of icecap over the last decades. This phenomenon raises sea level dramatically, destroying many animals' habitats and increasing the risk of their extinction. Meanwhile, the ever-increasing sea level could also interfere with humans by inundating a large amount/number of land/resources, especially farmland, which is one of the scarcest resources in modern society. Fortunately, governments and people around the world spare no effort to tackle this phenomenon and have made some progress. Governments and scientists are working together to cut down the emissions of greenhouse gases by substituting fossil fuels with clean energy, which produces fewer greenhouse gases. Currently, the combustion of fossil fuels constitutes the most significant part in the production of greenhouse gases, which are the leading cause of the greenhouse effect. To reduce the dependence on fossil fuels and alleviate the greenhouse effect, governments encourage both individuals and companies to use clean energy, such as solar power and wind power, by subsidizing electric automobiles or raising green taxes. Meanwhile, given the fact that drawbacks of the existing clean energy impede its popularization, it is also crucial for researchers to solve those drawbacks. Solar power and wind power, for example, ebb and flow, so scientists need to find a new way to store energy for nighttime.
The
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greenhouse
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people
around the world.
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some
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people
are apprehensive about the
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negative
influence of it. This essay will illustrate the leading impact of it
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before
moving on to the corresponding remedies.

Not
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only
has the
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greenhouse
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effect
threaten the existence of
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many
species,
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but
also
interfered with/posed threats to modern society. In fact, global warming caused by the
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greenhouse
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effect
has molten wide
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over the last decades. This phenomenon raises sea level
dramatically
, destroying
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many
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animals&
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risk
of their extinction. Meanwhile, the ever-increasing sea level could
also
interfere with humans by inundating a large amount/number of land/resources,
especially
farmland, which is one of the scarcest resources in modern society.
Fortunately
,
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governments
and
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people
around the world spare no effort to tackle this phenomenon and have made
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some
progress.

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Governments
and scientists are working together to
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cut
down the emissions of
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greenhouse
gases by substituting fossil fuels with clean
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energy
, which produces fewer
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greenhouse
gases.
Currently
, the combustion of fossil fuels constitutes the most significant part in the production of
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greenhouse
gases, which are the leading cause of the
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greenhouse
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effect
. To
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reduce
the dependence on fossil fuels and alleviate the
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greenhouse
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effect
,
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governments
encourage both individuals and
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companies
to
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use
clean
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energy
, such as solar
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power
and wind
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power
, by subsidizing electric automobiles or raising green taxes. Meanwhile,
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given
the fact that drawbacks of the existing clean
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energy
impede its popularization, it is
also
crucial for researchers to solve those drawbacks. Solar
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power
and wind
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power
,
for example
, ebb and flow,
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so
scientists need to find a new way to store
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energy
for nighttime.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay The greenhouse effect is one of the most heated topic of modern society What are the main problems it causes And what are the solutions for it v. 2

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
284 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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