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The greenhouse, also known as glass house, is used to nurture the plants by controlling certain variables, heat for example, thus, giving a better environment for the vegetarians.

The greenhouse, also known as glass house, is used to nurture the plants by controlling certain variables, heat for example, thus, giving a better environment for the vegetarians. YO0r
The greenhouse, also known as glass house, is used to nurture the plants by controlling certain variables, heat for example, thus, giving a better environment for the vegetarians. The illustrations demonstrate how the greenhouse achieves its main purpose. The process consists of three main stages. It starts when the sun casts its rays onto the greenhouse. The heat and light from the sunlight will, then, hit the floor and be reflected upwards. The properties of the light allows the rays to move in a straight line and since the house is made entirely of off glass, the heat is able to get in but is unable to escape the house. As a result, the trapped, heat circulates throughout the house and a constant temperature, which is tremendously beneficial to the development of plants, is obtained. To conclude, the green house is designed using glass to allow sunlight to enter but does not exit, creating an ideal living environment for the plants.
The greenhouse,
also
known as glass
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house
, is
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used
to nurture the plants by controlling certain variables,
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heat
for example
,
thus
, giving a better environment for the vegetarians. The illustrations demonstrate how the greenhouse achieves its main purpose.
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The
process consists of three main stages. It
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starts
when the sun casts its rays onto the greenhouse. The
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heat
and light from the sunlight will, then, hit the floor and
be reflected
upwards. The properties of the light
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
the rays to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
in a straight line and since the
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house
is made
entirely
of off glass, the
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heat
is able to
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get
in
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but
is unable to escape the
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house
.
As a result
, the trapped,
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heat
circulates throughout the
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house
and a constant temperature, which is
tremendously
beneficial to the development of plants,
is obtained
.
To conclude
, the green
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house
is designed
using glass to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
sunlight to enter
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but
does not exit, creating an ideal living environment for the plants.
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IELTS essay The greenhouse, also known as glass house, is used to nurture the plants by controlling certain variables, heat for example, thus, giving a better environment for the vegetarians.

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