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The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words v.1

The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days
All the students are not in the same situation. Everyone is different from each other. We will discuss about both the situations in the upcoming paragraphs. It is very true that learning in collections is better because while learning in groups it is very important to discover new ideas about the topic. If we start studying in clusters everyone will think about the solutions. For example, if we are talking about the subject mathematics, everyone is solving an exercise, then they can discuss with each other about the solution. When we start cramming in sets, it means the minds starts working in groups. Sometimes it is not suitable to study in groups because in every groups a person who is a non serious must be present. He/she will disturb everyone. Nobody can concentrate on study. For example, if we are studying on tuition and there are some non serious boys who are not taking care of the others, then it is very difficult for me to concentrate on study. On the other side, it is also said that self-study is better than the other. By doing this at home, he/she can concentrate by herself/himself. He/she will solve the examples and knows about the way how the problem has been solved. He/she will revise his/her suitable time. But if he/she fails to solve any question then he/she cannot go further. For Example, one day I was solving mathematical equations and I tried very hard, but I was unable to solve that equation. At that time, I thought someone must be here for my help. Finally, it is stated that self-study is better than study in groups.
All the students are not in the same situation.
Everyone
is
different
from each
other
. We will
discuss about both
the situations in the upcoming paragraphs.

It is
very
true that learning in collections is better
because
while learning in
groups
it is
very
important
to discover new
ideas
about the topic.
If
we
start
studying in clusters
everyone
will
think
about the solutions. For
example
, if we are talking about the subject mathematics,
everyone
is solving an exercise, then they can discuss with each
other
about the solution. When we
start
cramming in sets, it means the minds
starts
working in
groups
.
Sometimes
it is not suitable to study in
groups
because
in every
groups
a person who is a
non serious
must
be present.
He/she
will disturb
everyone
. Nobody can concentrate on study. For
example
, if we are studying on tuition and there are
some
non serious
boys who are not taking care of the others, then it is
very
difficult for me to concentrate on study.

On the
other
side, it is
also
said that self-study is better than the
other
. By doing this at home,
he/she
can concentrate by herself/himself.
He/she
will solve the
examples
and knows about the way how the problem has
been solved
.
He/she
will revise his/her suitable time.
But
if
he/she
fails to solve any question then
he/she
cannot go
further
. For
Example
, one day I was solving mathematical equations and I tried
very
hard
,
but
I was unable to solve that equation. At that time, I
thought
someone
must
be here for my
help
.

Finally
, it
is stated
that self-study is better than study in
groups
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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