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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. with this opinion? Nry7d
Nowadays with the start of daily use of technologies in particular internet connection we are all interconnected. That new way to communicate is revolutionary not just from a social prospective but also for new emergent business due to his speed and ductility. In few years small start-ups of e-commerce have became giant Corporations with bilions of dollars of income. This big change has involved milions of customers from the worldwide. All big changes bring positive and negative contributes to society and I will analize both ot them giving my opinion about it. On the one hand, from a customer prospective the new technological way to find bargains online was great. In 20 years from the small second hand market setted up on a garden in front of an house has became an online small market where people can buy from all over the world just by internet connection and the right platform. The easiest way to sell second hand item faster and in bigger volume has a positive impact on the enviroment creating less dispose to waste. The e-commerce has also give the chance to bright men with small capitals to invest and emerge creating new occupation hiring thousands of employers all over the world. On the other hand, it is undeniable fact that a lot of small local bussines are suffering this change because it really hard to compete with big warehouse were always the offer is wider and cheaper and a lot of them are destinate to close their activities. It will inderectly impact on consumers life because it will create more unemployemnt and less tax income for countries. Tax payment is another problem for several countries which are trying a way to set up a correct taxation for this ecommerce companies but it's still a grey zone. All these negative factors are impacting on the life of consumers and we will be able to see the effects in few years. In conclusion, the impact of new technologies on lives of consumers is huge and complicate to analize because it has brought a lot of changes in a small time frame. In addition these changes are positive in the short term but could be dangerous for society and economy in a long term without the right countermeasures.
Nowadays with the
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of daily
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of technologies
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internet connection we are all interconnected. That
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new
way to communicate is revolutionary not
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from a social prospective
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for
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emergent business due to his speed and ductility. In few years
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small
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start
-ups of e-commerce have
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giant Corporations with
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bilions
of dollars of income. This
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has involved
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milions
of customers from the worldwide. All
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and
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contributes to society and I will
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analize
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both ot
them giving my opinion about it.

On the one
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hand
, from a customer prospective the
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technological way to find bargains online was great. In 20 years from the
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small
second
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hand
market
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setted
up on a garden in front of
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has
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became
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small
market where
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people
can
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buy
from all over the world
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just
by internet connection and the right platform. The easiest way to sell second
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hand
item faster and in bigger volume has a
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positive
impact on the
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enviroment
creating less dispose to waste. The e-commerce has
also
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the chance to bright
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with
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small
capitals to invest and emerge creating
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occupation hiring thousands of employers all over the world.

On the other
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, it is undeniable fact that
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a lot of
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small
local
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bussines
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it
really
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to compete with
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warehouse were always the offer is wider and cheaper and
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a lot of
them are
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destinate
to close their activities. It will
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impact on
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consumers
life
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it will create more
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ecommerce
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factors are impacting on the life of
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consumers and
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the effects in few years.

In conclusion
, the impact of
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technologies on
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lives
of consumers is huge and complicate to
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it has brought
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in a
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small time
frame. In
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addition
these
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are
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positive
in the short term
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for society and economy in a long term without the right countermeasures.
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IELTS essay New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. with this opinion?

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4 paragraphs
379 words
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