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Outbreak of any pandemic leads to numerous problems. Identify major problems and suggest the way to tackle them.

Outbreak of any pandemic leads to numerous problems. Identify major problems and suggest the way to tackle them. kYgKO
The spread of the global pandemic is an unfortunate sight full event to watch. Undoubtedly, the global pandemic is tagged with numerous global issues. Health concerns and economy downfall are few falling into this list. However, certain measures are proposed by the experts to deal with them and this essay delineates some of them. Two main problems arising out of an unusual situation like the mass pandemic are the wide spread of the disease and the drastic drop in the economy. Having said that, certain developing countries around the globe are the top population carriers and people living in a close-knit lifestyle, further worsens the situation by enabling faster-spread of the disease leading to a global pandemic. Therefore, the health of the people falling in a certain age group is put at stake due to the declining immunity power with the progression of age. Thus, the government is forced to call out worldwide lockdown leading to another issue of the economy downfall, impacting various gigantic firms which cannot cope out for several decades. For instance, COVID-19 is declared as a pandemic by the World Health Organization, which lead to over several thousands of death due to the uncontrolled growth of the virus. However, the mankind is blessed to have certain experts around them to suggest ways of encountering these issues. Firstly, the experts suggest to have a strong constitutional force leading the nation during this situation. Furthermore, once the pandemic defence ruling party is established, it can sponsor the health care sectors for developing the vaccine, besides creating the awareness among public to boost the immunity power while the vaccine is worked upon. Secondly the newly born central power can support the worse hit firms by extending economical power by returning their taxes that were collected over several decades. To conclude, going through the situation like a global pandemic is a rare picture to experience. However, its everlasting issues like deaths of many individuals around the globe and falling of the economy can be skilfully tackled by committing to certain measures like the ruling power coming to the rescue of the massive firms and raising awareness among people to boost their immunity levels.
The spread of the
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global
pandemic is an unfortunate sight full
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event
to
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watch
.
Undoubtedly
, the
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global
pandemic
is tagged
with numerous
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global
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issues
.
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Health
concerns and
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economy
downfall are few falling into this list.
However
,
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certain
measures
are proposed
by the experts to deal with them and this essay delineates
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some
of them.

Two main problems arising out of an unusual
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situation
like the mass pandemic are the wide spread of the disease and the drastic drop in the
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economy
. Having said that,
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certain
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developing countries
around the globe are the top population carriers and
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people
living in a close-knit lifestyle,
further
worsens the
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situation
by enabling faster-spread of the disease leading to a
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global
pandemic.
Therefore
, the
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health
of the
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people
falling in a
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certain
age group
is put
at stake due to the declining immunity
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power
with the progression of age.
Thus
, the
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government
is forced
to call out worldwide lockdown leading to another
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issue
of the
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economy
downfall, impacting various gigantic firms which cannot cope out for several decades.
For instance
, COVID-19
is declared
as a pandemic by the World
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Health
Organization, which lead to over several thousands of death due to the uncontrolled growth of the virus.

However
, the mankind
is blessed
to have
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certain
experts around them to suggest ways of encountering these
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issues
.
Firstly
, the experts
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suggest to have
a strong constitutional force leading the nation during this
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situation
.
Furthermore
, once the pandemic
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defence
ruling party
is established
, it can sponsor the
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health
care sectors for developing the vaccine,
besides
creating the awareness among public to boost the immunity
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power
while the vaccine
is worked
upon.
Secondly
the
newly
born central
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power
can support the worse hit firms by extending
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economical
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power
by returning their taxes that
were collected
over several decades.

To conclude
, going through the
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situation
like a
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global
pandemic is a rare picture to experience.
However
, its everlasting
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issues
like deaths of
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many
individuals around the globe and falling of the
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economy
can be
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skilfully
tackled by committing to
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certain
measures like the ruling
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power
coming to the rescue of the massive firms and raising awareness among
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people
to boost their immunity levels.
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IELTS essay Outbreak of any pandemic leads to numerous problems. Identify major problems and suggest the way to tackle them.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
363 words
7
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