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The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environment problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatening issues such as global warming. to what extant do you agree?

The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environment problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatening issues such as global warming. to what extant do you agree? KKAw
Generally, the environment was very important because in there we can stay and live. good environment could be effected from our life style. It is good into mental, physical, and mind. The government try to repair and save with the money of country. the are efforts tried by the government. therefore, that is all just for people country. Most people have opinions about it and not few people think the government was not consistent and commitment. They just concern with their selves. They can do something just for them selves. For example, reducing the amount of money. It can enrich someone in government area. But nothing like that, not a lot people too thinking the government is already doing the best they can do. Everyone they do something from government should be for the society. They think if they can reduce the amount of money, it is can be saving the environment, everyone knows the environment could be saved when the government royal with money of country into repairing facilities, and etc. If every government can save and take hold priority for citizens. There are not be many corruptions in government area. it is become global warming in the world. In conclusion, i do not agree with reducing the amount of money inasmuch as that can affect money of country. but if the government do reduce the amount of money, the must be thinking about citizens economic. The government should understand about saving money of country. there was important because money of country was the point in some countries that "grow up a country"
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IELTS essay The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environment problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatening issues such as global warming. to what extant do you agree?

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