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Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisements. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisements. YqAK
All type of commercial ought to be baned because it provides the palthora of benefits to the community. I partially agree. This essay is going to discuss views in further paragraphs. Fundamentally, advertisements are sourse of information. People can glean more knowledge by watching it. when any new product come to the market, the advertisements are the only factor which send the detail of goods to individuals. For example, persons are obtained knowledgeable about the new version of mobile phones by the adverts. Addition to, it also dispense awareness among people. To illustrate, ors is a treatment to prevent the diarrhoea that tell by the advertisements to the individuals. Moving further, some of commercial should not be broadcast such as vulgar, rumours. For instance, agents who migrate the individuals to other nation, they are made their own popularity through the adverts. But they just take the money from the clients and cheat with them. These rumours are should ban so that no one can trapp in the net which fake agents are spread for the people for earning rupes. Recapulization, although adverts have many negative impact on the nation but it take number of postive development like individuals attract to the morden technology because of adverts.
All type of commercial ought to be
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baned
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because
it provides the
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palthora
of benefits to the community. I
partially
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agree
. This essay is going to discuss views in
further
paragraphs.
Fundamentally
, advertisements are
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sourse
of information.
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People
can glean more knowledge by watching it. when any new product
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come
to the market, the advertisements are the
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only
factor which
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send
the detail of
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goods
to
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individuals
.
For example
, persons
are obtained
knowledgeable about the new version of mobile phones by the adverts. Addition to, it
also
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dispense
awareness among
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people
. To illustrate,
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ors is
a treatment to
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prevent
the
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diarrhoea
that
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tell
by the advertisements to the
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individuals
. Moving
further
,
Consider using "some commercial" or "some of the commercial".
some of commercial
should not be broadcast such as vulgar,
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rumours
.
For instance
, agents who migrate the
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individuals
to other nation, they
are made
their
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own
popularity through the adverts.
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But
they
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just
take the money from the clients and cheat with them. These
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rumours
are should ban
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so
that no one can
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trapp
in the net which fake agents
are spread
for the
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people
for earning
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rupes
.
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Recapulization
, although adverts have
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many
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negative
impact on the nation
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but
it
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take
number of
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postive
development like
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individuals
attract to the
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morden
technology
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because
of adverts.
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IELTS essay Society would benefit from a complete ban on all forms of advertisements.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
206 words
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