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The government should allocate more funding to teach science rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree?

Science plays an important role in the growth and progress of a nation. However, other subjects are also important for the economic development of a country. Therefore, I believe that the government should allot equal funds for the teaching of all subjects. Science subjects are definitely helpful. They help to solve many problems affecting us and our environment. Government funding will lead to improvement in medical research and the invention of many cures. Health, after all, is wealth. In order for a nation to progress, its people have to be healthy. Research in medical science facilitates this. In addition, scientific research in agriculture can increase the fertility of the land and result in economic growth. Science subjects like technology and engineering also play a crucial role in making our lives happy and comfortable. Obviously, the government funding of science subjects helps the country to develop and progress. However, this does not mean that only science subjects are important. Other subjects like arts, crafts, literature and humanities also play an important role in the overall progress of a nation. These subjects make people aware of their history and culture. They improve our aesthetic skills and enhance the overall quality of our life. Art subjects provide plenty of job opportunities too. After all, no nation can progress only on the wings of science. To conclude, government funding should not be limited to science subjects. For the overall development of the country, the government should support the teaching of other subjects as well.
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role in the growth and
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, other
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are
also
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important
for the economic development of a country.
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, I believe that the
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government
should allot equal funds for the teaching of all subjects.

Science
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subjects
are definitely helpful. They
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help
to solve
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many
problems affecting us and our environment.
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funding will lead to improvement in medical research and the invention of
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many
cures. Health,
after all
, is wealth. In order for a
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nation
to
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progress
, its
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people
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have to
be healthy. Research in medical
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science
facilitates this.
In addition
, scientific research in agriculture can increase the fertility of the land and result in economic growth.
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Science
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subjects
like technology and engineering
also
play a crucial role in making our
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lives
happy and comfortable.
Obviously
, the
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funding of
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science
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helps
the country to develop and progress.

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like arts, crafts, literature and humanities
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overall
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of a
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make
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people
aware of their history and culture. They
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improve
our aesthetic
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skills
and enhance the
overall
quality of our life. Art
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subjects
provide
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plenty
of job opportunities too.
After all
, no
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can
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progress
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only
on the wings of science.

To conclude
,
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government
funding should not
be limited
to
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science
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subjects
. For the
overall
development of the country, the
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government
should support the teaching of other
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subjects
as well
.
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IELTS essay The government should allocate more funding to teach science rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
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