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The gap between the rich and poor is growing. What difficulties does this cause? How can these problems be overcome?

Today have a number of difference the rich and poor. There might be several causes of this potential issue, although I believe societies should take steps to deal with them. There are several issues cased by an increase in gap between rich and poor. Firstly, there are a plethora of universities in the world, on the contrary most people want to study top universities and it is tough for the poor. Due to the fact people who take a university exam and pass come across some payments. For instance, annual fee, cost of living etc. Another concerning point is that supermarket products prices are essential for the poor. For example, some alcohol drinks and meat prices are expensive and The rich when do shopping buy everything what they want, on the contrary poor think which product is matter for me. However, There are several actions to tackle the problems described above. To begin with, have a number of solutions' university payments which the poor do not suffer any financial issues. Today, most colleges and universities give scholarship which consist of dormitory and much money every month. Another possible solution about supermarket. Sometimes, they share free food boxes which people take necessary products from there. Moreover, every week companies create a special discount for people and I am convinced most of the people do not miss sales. In conclusion, the gap between the rich and the poor is widening and has created many problems like mental issues. However, if the government exercises enough political willpower it is possible to solve these problems.
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Today
have a number of difference the
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rich
and
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poor
. There might be several causes of this potential
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issue
, although I believe societies should take steps to deal with them.

There are several
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issues
cased by an increase in gap between
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rich
and
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poor
.
Firstly
, there are a plethora of
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universities
in the world,
on the contrary
most
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people
want to study top
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universities and
it is tough for the
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poor
. Due to the fact
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people
who take a
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university
exam and pass
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come
across
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some
payments.
For instance
, annual fee, cost of living etc. Another concerning point is that supermarket products prices are essential for the
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poor
.
For example
,
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some
alcohol drinks and meat prices are expensive and The
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rich
when do shopping
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buy
everything what they want,
on the contrary
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poor
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think
which product is matter for me.

However
, There are several actions to tackle the problems
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described
above. To
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begin
with, have a number of solutions'
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university
payments which the
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poor
do not suffer any financial
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issues
.
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Today
, most colleges and
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universities
give scholarship which consist of dormitory and much money every month. Another possible solution about supermarket.
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Sometimes
, they share free food boxes which
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people
take necessary products from there.
Moreover
, every week
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companies
create a special discount for
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people and
I
am convinced
most of the
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people
do not miss sales.

In conclusion
, the gap between the
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rich
and the
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poor
is widening and has created
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many
problems like mental
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issues
.
However
, if the
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government
exercises
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enough
political willpower it is possible to solve these problems.
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IELTS essay The gap between the rich and poor is growing. What difficulties does this cause? How can these problems be overcome?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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