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The flowchart below explains how laundry is handled.

The flowchart illustrates the process in which laundry is operated. Overall, the process consist of ten stages beginning with laundry gathered from suppliers and ending up with the laundry sent to folding machine. In the next stage, laundry collected from suppliers. Next, towels and linens are divided. Then, laundry filled in to laundry bags. In the next stage, the bags are transfer and loaded to laundry machine. The machine wash the clothes for two hours. Then, water is partially drained from wet clothing by the pressing machine. Next, towels are dried completely but the linens are half dried. So, in the next stage linens are sent for ironed to dried completely. Finally, laundry moved to folding machine.
The flowchart illustrates the process in which
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laundry
is operated
.
Overall
, the process consist of ten
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stages
beginning with
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laundry
gathered from suppliers and ending up with the
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laundry
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sent
to folding
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machine
. In the
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next
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stage
,
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laundry
collected from suppliers.
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Next
, towels and linens
are divided
. Then,
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laundry
filled in to
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laundry
bags. In the
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next
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stage
, the bags are transfer and loaded to
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laundry
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machine
. The
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machine
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wash
the clothes for two hours. Then, water is
partially
drained from wet clothing by the pressing
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machine
.
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Next
, towels
are dried
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completely
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but
the linens are half dried.
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So
, in the
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next
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stage
linens are
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sent
for ironed to dried completely.
Finally
,
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laundry
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moved
to folding
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machine
.
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IELTS essay The flowchart below explains how laundry is handled.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
117 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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