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the floor plans of a public library now and after its intended development.

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The illustration shows the floor plans of a public library now and after its intended development. Overall, it’s a one-floor building and has steps leading up to the entrance. The main difference is that the library will be extended to the east, roughly doubling its size to allow for the addition of extra facilities. After the extension, on the east side of the library, there will be a new entrance into a kid’s area where the kid’s books will be moved, and additional seating will be added. To the south of the kid’s area will be a computer room, and to the north will be a store and a staff room with its own staff entrance. The existing library space will become the main area and will be narrower due to an internal wall constructed from the north to the south end of the building. The male and female restrooms, original entrance, and sections for romance and thriller will all remain unchanged within this area. However, the seating, fantasy and mystery sections will be relocated closer to the west side of the building to accommodate the changes.
The illustration
shows
the floor plans of a public library
now
and after its intended development.
Overall
, it’s a one-floor building and has steps leading up to the entrance. The main difference is that the library will
be extended
to the east, roughly doubling its size to
allow
for the addition of extra facilities.

After the extension, on the east side of the library, there will be a new entrance into a kid’s
area
where the kid’s books will be
moved
, and additional seating will be
added
. To the south of the kid’s
area
will be a computer room, and to the north will be a store and a staff room with its
own
staff entrance.

The existing library space will become the main
area
and will be narrower due to an internal wall constructed from the north to the south
end
of the building. The male and female restrooms, original entrance, and sections for romance and thriller will all remain unchanged within this
area
.
However
, the seating, fantasy and mystery sections will
be relocated
closer to the west side of the building to accommodate the
changes
.
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IELTS essay the floor plans of a public library now and after its intended development.

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187 words
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