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The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Neil Armstrong, the first person to walk on the moon, has created history. It opened a door to a new set of possibilities that prior to the event seemed impossible. Although, it expanded space exploration, this event has brought no change in daily chores of most of the people. Humans have always researched how celestial objects can benefit us. When NASA succeeded in their project to walk on the moon, it created a foundation for a future where humans could travel to different planets. For example, SpaceX CEO floated an idea to start a civilization on Mars. Such imagination lead to technical developments, such a rocket manufactured by the same company that can be used for multiple times. However, these technologies hardly have any use in daily lives of people. In day-to-day life, such historical events are often just news, as they offer nothing to change one's way of living. An average worker continues with his forty hours of work week to earn their bread and butter. The worries and tensions that encompass a struggling individual do not reduce. In fact, even the event itself is put into question. For example, it has been contested that the moon landing was fake, and even the videotapes that NASA possessed have mysteriously vanished. When the significance lowers, it does not impacts daily lives. In conclusion, there has been an improvement in spatial research due to this milestone, however, it has hardly shaped the daily way of living. It would prove beneficial to mankind if such research can contribute to significantly solve challenges that the common man faces.

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event
 seemed impossible. Although, it expanded space exploration, this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
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change
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people
.

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different
 planets. For example
, SpaceX CEO floated an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
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start
 a civilization on Mars. Such imagination lead to technical developments, such a rocket manufactured by the same This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 that can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for multiple times. However
, these technologies hardly have any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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daily
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lives
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

In day-to-day life, such historical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
 are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 news, as they offer nothing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 one's way of living. An average worker continues with his forty hours of work week to earn their bread and butter. The worries and tensions that encompass a struggling individual do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
. In fact, even the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
 itself is put
 into question. For example
, it has been contested
 that the moon landing was fake, and even the videotapes that NASA possessed have mysteriously
 vanished. When the significance lowers, it does not impacts You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregularlyoftenperiodicconstantlyregularroutine
daily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
.

In conclusion
, there has been an improvement in spatial research due to this milestone, however
, it has hardly shaped the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withregularlyoftenperiodicconstantlyregularroutine
daily
 way of living. It would prove beneficial to mankind if such research can contribute to significantly
 solve challenges that the common This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 faces. 