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The first date is a strange meeting

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The first date is a strange meeting. If you are already really into the person you’re going out with, it is always exciting. It may fill with laughs and flirty banter. If you’re lucky enough, the first date is also your first opportunity to mess up a relationship forever. Unfortunately, the first date can also be really awkward. It will either start off with small chat and awkward silences. You are worrying on what you should look like and how you should act on your first date. Many people get anxious on first dates because they are trying to anticipate what is going to happen next or they don’t know what to start a conversation with. Do not lose hope if your date did not go well because it
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opportunity to mess up a relationship forever. Unfortunately, the
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chat and awkward silences. You are worrying on what you should look like and how you should act on your
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IELTS essay The first date is a strange meeting

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
128 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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