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Some people say that we should protect animals from dying out while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human being .discuss both views and your opinion

Some people say that we should protect animals from dying out while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human being. discuss both views and your opinion raO26
A group of individuals think that to protect the animals from dying out while other individuals consider to focus more on human life problems in my point of view experiments should be limited which are done on animals for different purposes and focus more on human being problems the first and foremost reason is that experiments done on various species of birds and animals for introducing new medicines and various researches is the main cause animals and birds have the right to live to live in this world without these the ecological balance get effected asurvey conducted by western europe society revealed that some species of monkeys are at the stage of extinction on the other hand human life is more precious in this world than any other different diseases and human causing problems increasing rapidly with the passage of time human activities to expand knowldge by disturbing life cycle of nature is one of the prominent reason to cite an examplecorona virus disease was introduced by the mistake of wuhan scientist in china and steadily it spread all around the world in my point of view experiments done for various scientific reasearches on animals should be limited and under the provison of government officals researchers should more concentrate to devolopmedical science equipments and life saving medicines in conclusion, although, animals life is important to manitain ecological balance but human life is more important than any other
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think
that to protect the
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animals
from dying out while
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other
individuals consider to focus more on
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human
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life
problems in my point of view experiments should
be limited
which
are done
on
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animals
for
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different
purposes and focus more on
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human
being problems

the
first
and foremost reason is that experiments done on various species of birds and
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animals
for introducing new medicines and various researches is the main cause
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animals
and birds have the right to
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live
to
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live
in this world without these the ecological balance
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get
effected
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asurvey
conducted by
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western europe
society revealed that
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some
species of monkeys are at the stage of extinction

on the
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other
hand
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human
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life
is more precious in this world than any
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other
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different
diseases and
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human
causing problems increasing
rapidly
with the passage of time
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human
activities to expand
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knowldge
by disturbing
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life
cycle of nature is one of the prominent reason to cite an
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examplecorona
virus disease
was introduced
by the mistake of
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wuhan
scientist in
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china
and
steadily
it spread all around the world

in my point of view experiments done for various scientific
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reasearches
on
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animals
should
be limited
and under the
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provison
of
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government
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officals
researchers should more concentrate to
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devolopmedical
science equipments and
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life
saving medicines

in conclusion
, although,
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animals
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life
is
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important
to
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manitain
ecological balance
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but
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human
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life
is more
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important
than any
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other
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IELTS essay Some people say that we should protect animals from dying out while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human being. discuss both views and your opinion

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