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The figure shows a cross-section of an erupting volcano

The picture below represents a cross-section of an erupting volcano and how it works and changes the environment located at its neighborhood. Firstly, the unlimited magma source which is settled under the Earth’s crust begins to evacuate from a chamber and as the magma reaches to the top enough, it chooses among the pipes (conduit or branch pipes) to exit. Following this, the volcano produces two main products which are lava flow and cloud made of ash. It’s clear that, if the magma comes out from the major vent on the summit, it creates both of the indicated objects, on the other hand, the ash cloud is not generated by magma running through the side vent. Finally, as the lava flow on the flank starts the heat-interchanging with air, it causes the volcano’s mountain to be covered by layers of lava and ash during decades or centuries. Overall, it’s a hundred percent logical to declare that a volcano revealing and formation requires a long-term period that changes its surrounding.

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volcano
 and how it works and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 the environment located at its neighborhood.

Firstly
, the unlimited You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslagbasalt
magma
 source which is settled
 under the Earth’s crust This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 to evacuate from a chamber and as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslagbasalt
magma
 reaches to the top This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
, it chooses among the pipes (conduit or branch pipes) to exit.

Following this, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withridgeelevationpilepeakbluffcliff
volcano
 produces two main products which are lava flow and cloud made of ash. It’s This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that, if the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslagbasalt
magma
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 out from the major vent on the summit, it creates both of the indicated objects, on the other hand
, the ash cloud is not generated by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslagbasalt
magma
 running through the side vent. Finally
, as the lava flow on the flank This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiates
starts
 the heat-interchanging with air, it causes the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withridgeelevationpilepeakbluffcliff
volcano’s
 mountain to be covered
 by layers of lava and ash during decades or centuries.

Overall
, it’s a hundred percent logical to declare that a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withridgeelevationpilepeakbluffcliff
volcano
 revealing and formation requires a long-term period that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 its surrounding. 