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The favourite gift that you have received, from whom? Why it is important?

The favourite gift that you have received, from whom? Why it is important? gb2jg
Getting or giving away gifts are always interesting. I do have many gifts to remember, among from that the one which I value more is a rosary, which was given by my mother. Its was the one which she uses for her prayers, she used to keep it separate so that we will not lose or damage it. But when it comes the time for me to go for my higher studies she hander it over to me. From then iam keeping it with me all the time. Its not just a gift, its everything to me. I feel very comfort, I feel her presence everytime I hold it.
Getting or giving away gifts are always interesting. I do have
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gifts to remember, among from that the one which I value more is a rosary, which was
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by my mother. Its was the one which she
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for her prayers, she
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it separate
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that we will not lose or damage it.
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when it
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the time for me to go for my higher studies
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she hander
it over to me. From then
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keeping it with me all the time. Its not
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a gift, its everything to me. I feel
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comfort, I feel her presence
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I hold it.
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IELTS essay The favourite gift that you have received, from whom? Why it is important?

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