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The essence of happiness has always been a topic of various discussions. While some people think that childhood is the happiest period of one’s life, others claim that adult life happens to be much happier. Although childhood has a certain amount of positives, adulthood seems to be the happiest time based upon the high level of consciousness and more freedom in decision-making. A few observations offer support to consider teenage years as the happiest. One supportive argument states that youngsters have no responsibilities in their lives as they are fully dependent on their parents. To further explain, they have more spare time to devote to their hobbies and other pleasant activities. In addition to this point, once young people encounter a problem, they are free to ask adults for help. It means that every big problem is solved with parents’ assistance, which reduces the number of mistakes and lets young people fully enjoy their life. Despite the above arguments, some could oppose

The essence of happiness has always been a topic of various discussions. While some people think that childhood is the happiest period of one’s life, others claim that adult life happens to be much happier. Although childhood has a certain amount of positives, adulthood seems to be the happiest time based upon the high level of consciousness and more freedom in decision-making. A few observations offer support to consider teenage years as the happiest. One supportive argument states that youngsters have no responsibilities in their lives as they are fully dependent on their parents. To further explain, they have more spare time to devote to their hobbies and other pleasant activities. In addition to this point, once young people encounter a problem, they are free to ask adults for help. It means that every big problem is solved with parents’ assistance, which reduces the number of mistakes and lets young people fully enjoy their life. Despite the above arguments, some could oppose that mature life provides people with more reasons for happiness, which surpasses the increased amount of responsibilities. As an initial point, the older a person becomes, the higher level of consciousness they develop. This gives a better understanding that life is too short to be unhappy. Furthermore, being older, people have enough freedom to make independent choices. This full control over life gives a sense of self-esteem, fulfillment, and, eventually, happiness. Undeniably, both childhood and adulthood have their own unique reasons to be happy. Be that as it may, adult life brings more happiness because it is reached through a higher level of consciousness and control over life.

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