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The environmental problems facing today s world are so great that there is little ordinary people can to improve the situation Governments and large companies should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment To what v.1

The environmental problems facing today s world are so great that there is little ordinary people can to improve the situation Governments and large companies should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment To what v. 1
In this era of globalisation, where people around the world travel to different countries for their necessities. Thus, they need to learn different languages to communicate with the native people. Some people find it difficult and troublesome to learn foreign accent, while others find it somewhat easy. In this essay we will discuss the most problematic elements of learning a foreign language such as accents, pronunciation and grammar. However, there are many ways to cope up with this problem. Firstly, people from different regions have different accents and also they have a variety of phrases to use. For example, in Korea people, mostly talk to each other in a questioning manner, whereas in English accents it is not their criteria of speaking. Secondly, the government should make learning foreign language mandatory from the initial level of education. Because, if a person is new to learn a new jargon and one has to speak it in a native speaker style then it will be struggling for that person. For instance, Chinese language is now becoming mandatory in some schools of Karachi and pupil are struggling to learn it. On the other hand, in this era of technology, there are such applications which can connect one person to another through this anyone can communicate to the person living in another country. Furthermore, there are applications which help in learning foreign language. For instance, Duolingo is the application I used to learn Arabic and found it helpful. To put in a nutshell, learning foreign language is not difficult if people learn each others' cultures and the authorities should play their role to make it mandatory in the course subjects as well. People now have the vast range of learning through technology, which can abide their distances of communication barrier.
In this era of
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globalisation
, where
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people
around the world travel to
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different
countries for their necessities.
Thus
, they need to
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learn
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different
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languages
to communicate with the native
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people
.
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Some
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people
find it difficult and troublesome to
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learn
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foreign
accent, while others find it somewhat easy. In this essay we will discuss the most problematic elements of
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learning
a
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foreign
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language
such as accents, pronunciation and grammar.
However
, there are
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many
ways to cope up with this problem.

Firstly
,
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people
from
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different
regions have
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different
accents and
also
they have a variety of phrases to
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use
.
For example
, in Korea
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people
,
mostly
talk to each other
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in a questioning manner
, whereas in English accents it is not their criteria of speaking.
Secondly
, the
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government
should
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make
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learning
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foreign
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language
mandatory from the initial level of education.
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Because
, if a
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person
is new to
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learn
a new jargon and one
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has to
speak it in a native speaker style then it will be struggling for that
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person
.
For instance
, Chinese
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language
is
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now
becoming mandatory in
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some
schools of Karachi and pupil are struggling to
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learn
it.

On the other hand
, in this era of technology, there are such applications which can connect one
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person
to another through this anyone can communicate to the
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person
living in another country.
Furthermore
, there are applications which
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help
in
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learning
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foreign
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language
.
For instance
, Duolingo is the application I
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used
to
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learn
Arabic and found it helpful.

To put in a nutshell,
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learning
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foreign
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language
is not difficult if
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people
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learn
each
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others'
cultures and the authorities should play their role to
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make
it mandatory in the course subjects
as well
.
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People
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now
have the vast range of
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learning
through technology, which can abide their distances of communication barrier.
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Language shapes the way we think, and determines what we can think about.
Benjamin Lee Whorf

IELTS essay The environmental problems facing today s world are so great that there is little ordinary people can to improve the situation Governments and large companies should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment To what v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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