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The Effects of Media among Youths Society

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The media rais up the violence rate among teenagers in the community while individuals propose that this issue can be handled by authority. I agree with this idea. It is a contolable subject; rather, it is encouraging teenagers to break low and do crimes. Recently, young people being easy to influenced as their is many things may affect them wrongly. One of these are bad movies which make those who have a rude behavior as a heros. Such as “Grand” who steal cars and kill people in the street. In addition, matters of Tv shows are a vital industry which can be changed too. If we force those producters to keep their content safe then we will have a quite environment. However, it is something avilable by the authorised institution. Indeed, they are able to restrict these practices in our sociaty as well as our production of subjects In conclusion, legal institution are the one who responsiable to put limitations for media products. They should take action in order to save our generations.
The media
rais
up the violence rate among
teenagers
in the community while individuals propose that this issue can
be handled
by authority. I
agree
with this
idea
. It is a
contolable
subject;
rather
, it is encouraging
teenagers
to break low and do crimes.

Recently, young
people
being easy to influenced as
their
is
many
things may affect them
wrongly
. One of these are
bad
movies which
make
those who have a rude behavior as
a heros
. Such as “Grand” who steal cars and kill
people
in the street.
In addition
, matters of
Tv
shows
are a vital industry which can be
changed
too. If we force those
producters
to
keep
their content safe then we will have a
quite environment
.
However
, it is something
avilable
by the
authorised
institution.
Indeed
, they are able to restrict these practices in our
sociaty
as well
as our production of subjects 
In conclusion
, legal institution are the one who
responsiable
to put limitations for media products. They should take action in order to save our generations.
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IELTS essay The Effects of Media among Youths Society

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
172 words
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