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The disadvantages of turism

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Tourism is a critical source of income for many countries. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems, especially if it is not managed well. The most important reason is that tourism can often cause environmental damages with risk like erosion and pollution. Therefore, it can increase the rate of crime in touristic Cities like rubbery and pick pocketing. The other thing that I can mention is historical damages, because if governments do not control the number of tourists who visit their countries each year, their historical sites may be damaged. Although tourism has many benefits for governments in addition to the disadvantages, we must try to minimize the disadvantages.

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