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the difference in geography leads to an uneven distribution of clean water. However, we still have an amount of water supply for domestic needs.

the difference in geography leads to an uneven distribution of clean water. However, we still have an amount of water supply for domestic needs. d3DDP
The Water World was celebrated on March 22nd, 2007 with many rallies, press conferences, seminars, including India, Zimbabwe, Bangladesh. After a month, there is little result in major press mentioned the water-related problems, although Accessing(V-ing) clean water/ access(N) to clean water is one of the biggest pressing problems of the world. The UN estimated one billion people lack fresh water. Even though the world’s surface is covered by water, there is little available water supply that people easy access. All of the clean water is located beneath Antarctic glaciers or lake Baikal in Siberia, Russia. Many people think water is a renewable resource, but in practice, it is limited and available at some certain stage in a short period. Take cycle water as an example, water flows from land into the oceans, then evaporates to form clouds and returns to land as rainfall. These resources are used for domestic human needs, agriculture, manufacturing. Currently, the difference in geography leads to an uneven distribution of clean water. However, we still have an amount of water supply for domestic needs. Canada is the country that provides drinking water for residents the most. On the other hand, the middle east, such as Yemen has lacked sufficient access to drinking water due to the rapid growth of population in 2050. In China, the government has conducted a new project to divert water flow from the TRUONG GIANG river to the northern provinces, due to the significant decline of water supply. Such prospect was caused by the economy and industry development in this country. In other countries, rainwater harvesting measures are applied in Australia, India, southwest America. Besides, irrigation technology was installed to provide water to root zone in wealthy countries and to alleviate the situation of water-stressed countries. Another technology in the middle east and the coastal city of Israel is the desalination process to convert seawater into freshwater. Despite the high cost associated with the desalination process, reserve osmosis technology provided water with the same price as the conventional water utilities. Agriculture is the most water-consumed- field, but because of the water inequalities and the difficulties of transfer water. Therefore, a virtual trade strategy is implemented in many water-stressed countries. To plant an average of one kilogram of wheat, we need the water five times more than such an amount of producing one kilogram of meat When people with high standards, their meat consumption level was higher, leading to pressure on the global water supply. Therefore, western consumption habits and other commercial patterns are crucial to the agricultural countries related to water stress. Moreover, climate change is one of the culprits for damaging the water supply. Especially in middle Asia, the Aral ocean has shrunk half of the river size. Finally, the rapid growth population was estimated nearly 8. 9 billion people by 2050 will increase the water stress more than decrease the problems.
The
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Water
World
was celebrated
on March 22nd, 2007 with
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many
rallies, press conferences, seminars, including India, Zimbabwe, Bangladesh. After a month, there is
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little
result in major press mentioned the water-related problems, although Accessing(
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V-ing
)
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clean
water/ access(N) to
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clean
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water
is one of the biggest pressing problems of the world.

The UN estimated one billion
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people
lack fresh
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water
.
Even though
the world’s surface
is covered
by
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water
, there is
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little
available
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water
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supply
that
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people
easy access.

Consider using "all the".
All of the
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clean
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water
is located
beneath Antarctic glaciers or
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lake Baikal
in Siberia, Russia.

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Many
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people
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think
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water
is a renewable resource,
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but
in practice, it
is limited
and available at
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some
certain stage in a short period.

Take cycle
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water
as an example,
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water
flows from land into the oceans, then evaporates to form clouds and returns to land as rainfall. These resources are
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used
for domestic human needs, agriculture, manufacturing.

Currently
, the difference in geography leads to an uneven distribution of
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clean
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water
.
However
, we
still
have an amount of
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water
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supply
for domestic needs.

Canada is the
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country
that provides drinking
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water
for residents the most.
On the other hand
, the
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middle east
, such as Yemen has lacked sufficient access to drinking
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water
due to the rapid growth of population in 2050.

In China, the
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government
has conducted a new project to divert
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water
flow from the
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TRUONG
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GIANG
river to the northern provinces, due to the significant decline of
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water
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supply
. Such prospect
was caused
by the economy and industry development in this country.

In other
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countries
, rainwater harvesting measures
are applied
in Australia, India, southwest America.

Besides
, irrigation technology
was installed
to provide
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water
to root zone in wealthy
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countries
and to alleviate the situation of water-
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stressed
countries.

Another technology in the
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middle east
and the coastal city of Israel is the desalination process to convert seawater into freshwater. Despite the high cost associated with the desalination process, reserve osmosis technology provided
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water
with the same price as the conventional
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water
utilities.

Agriculture is the most water-consumed- field,
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but
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because
of the
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water
inequalities and the difficulties of transfer
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water
.
Therefore
, a virtual trade strategy
is implemented
in
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many
water-
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stressed
countries.

To plant an average of one kilogram of wheat, we need the
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water
five times more than such an amount of producing one kilogram of meat

When
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people
with high standards, their meat consumption level was higher, leading to pressure on the global
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water
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supply
.
Therefore
, western consumption habits and other commercial patterns are crucial to the agricultural
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countries
related to
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water
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stress
.

Moreover
, climate
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change
is one of the culprits for damaging the
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water
supply.

Especially
in middle Asia, the Aral ocean has shrunk half of the river size.

Finally
, the rapid growth population
was estimated
nearly
8. 9 billion
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people
by 2050 will increase the
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water
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stress
more than decrease the problems.
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IELTS essay the difference in geography leads to an uneven distribution of clean water. However, we still have an amount of water supply for domestic needs.

Essay
  American English
16 paragraphs
481 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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