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The given picture illustrates the fundamental stages involved in the manufacturing of sugar from sugar cane. Overall, it is clear that the process includes seven main steps, grouped into three stages starting with the preparation of raw material, followed by the extraction and finishing with cooling and crystallisation. Looking at the first preparation stages, sugar canes are grown from 12 to 18 months before they are manually harvested by sickle or using a specialised machine. Afterwards, they are crushed by a machine-pressure to extract the juice. This juice is then passed through a limestone filter in order to eliminate the harmful substances. Once finished, this filter juice is heated in a certain temperature and thickens into a syrup. After that, this syrup is put into a centrifuge and based on its speed of motor to separate sugar crystal from the molasses. This process is followed by drying and cooling this syrup into a cylindrical machine, ready for delivery and sale.

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 machine. Afterwards, they are crushed
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Once finished, this filter juice is heated
 in a certain temperature and thickens into a syrup. After that, this syrup is put
 into a centrifuge and based on its speed of motor to separate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
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 crystal from the molasses. This process is followed
 by drying and cooling this syrup into a cylindrical machine, ready for delivery and sale. 