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The design of buildings has an important effect on the people who use them.’ What do you think? Write about: 1. homes 2. colleges 3. your own idea

The design of buildings has an important effect on the people who use them. ’ What do you think? Write about: 1. homes 2. colleges 3. your own idea b30kW
People live, stay and use buildings all the time, but how much the design of them affect in her diary life? Firstly, homes are more than just a place for living It has a meaning for the people who use it. It is a place where people grow up and spend most of their time. Families decorated their houses because houses are part of them, they design them as their wishes. The second building where people spend a lot of time in are colleges. It is where students learn, study and make friends. Their design has to be comfortable and correctly distribute so students can concentrate. Hospital are fundamental for society. Most people are afraid when they visit them. It is because of this that their walls are mostly white, this colour is calming and relaxing. In conclusion, most of our time we do not notice the design of building but they have real influencity on us
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of them affect in her diary life?

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a place for living It has a meaning for the
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who
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it. It is a place where
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people
grow up and spend most of their
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time
. Families decorated their
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houses
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because
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houses
are part of them, they
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them as their wishes.

The second building where
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spend
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a lot of
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time
in are colleges. It is where students learn, study and
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make
friends. Their
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design
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has to
be comfortable and
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distribute
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students can concentrate.

Hospital
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are
fundamental for society. Most
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people
are afraid when they visit them. It is
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that their walls are
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colour
is calming and relaxing.

In conclusion
, most of our
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we do not notice the
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of building
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but
they have real
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influencity
on us

IELTS essay The design of buildings has an important effect on the people who use them. ’ What do you think? Write about: 1. homes 2. colleges 3. your own idea

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
156 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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