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The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? QL7o1
Nowadays tobacco is the best selling product in the entire world. Although every body knows about the risk of smoking many won't reduce their habit. In this essay I will list out the probelms and how to overcome it. There are many risks involved for smoking, especially heart problems and different types of cancers. Not only for the smoker (the person who is smoking) the major effect on lung will cause to other who stood near to smoking person. The chemicals used in the tobacoo will damage the whole body tissues, which are used as antigens. For exmaple, my friend's dad smoking from 8 years has effect by blood cancer due to the high intake of Nicotin. Now he is suffering from cancer and his body has been partially paralazied. Due to this his family is been suffering. There are many solutions to avoid smoking like banning the products, Increasing prices and opening many rehabilation centres. Firstly, government should take it up as a serious issue and have to educate people to avoid smoking. They have to increase price so people who smoke 2 packs per day can reduce to 3 cigerates per day. Opening rehailation and help cetres to guide people and showing the danger involved will help people to aviod smoking. Banning it also a good option but after banning government has to take care of no illegal transportaion and Tobacco selling. To conclude this, for every probelm their will be a solution. So we have to educate people about the health probelm causes for smoking, and help them to reduce it and make a way to join in rehab centres.
Nowadays tobacco is the
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best selling
product in the entire world.
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reduce
their habit. In this essay I will list out the
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probelms
and how to overcome it.

There are
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many
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risks
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smoking
,
especially
heart problems and
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different
types of cancers. Not
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only
for the smoker (the person who is
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smoking)
the major effect on lung will cause to other who stood near to
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smoking
person. The chemicals
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used
in the
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tobacoo
will damage the whole body tissues, which are
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used
as antigens. For
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exmaple
, my friend's dad
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smoking
from 8 years has effect by blood cancer due to the high intake of
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Nicotin
.
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Now
he is suffering from cancer and his body has been
partially
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paralazied
. Due to this his family
is been
suffering.

There are
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solutions to avoid
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smoking
like banning the products, Increasing prices and opening
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rehabilation
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,
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government
should take it up as a serious issue and
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have to
educate
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people
to avoid
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smoking
. They
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have to
increase price
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so
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people
who smoke 2 packs per day can
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reduce
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cigerates
per day. Opening
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rehailation
and
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help
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cetres
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people
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danger
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aviod
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also
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good
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after banning
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government
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has to
take care of no illegal
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transportaion
and Tobacco selling.

To conclude
this, for every
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probelm
their will be a solution.
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we
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educate
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about the health
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causes for
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smoking
, and
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make
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join
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IELTS essay The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
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