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Successful administrations have failed to solve the country's economic problems. The Asian Football Confederation has an article praising the impressive final game in Changzhou, China. It said the match at the final round wrapped up Vietnam’s memorable journey at the tournament but it will live forever in the memory of fans in this Southeast Asian country. Coach Park Hang-seo’s strong spirit has been widely praised. Indonesia’s Bola Akurat sports newspaper praised the strong spirit of the Vietnam U23 team despite playing in snow. The newspaper reviewed the Vietnamese team’s achievements at the tournament saying it marked a milestone in modern Southeast Asian sports
Successful administrations have failed to solve the country's economic problems. The Asian Football Confederation has an article praising the impressive final game in
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Changzhou
, China. It said the match at the final round wrapped up Vietnam’s memorable journey at the tournament
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it will
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forever in the memory of fans in this Southeast Asian country. Coach Park
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Hang-seo
’s strong spirit has been
widely
praised. Indonesia’s Bola
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Akurat
sports newspaper praised the strong spirit of the Vietnam U23 team despite playing in snow. The newspaper reviewed the Vietnamese team’s achievements at the tournament saying it marked a milestone in modern Southeast Asian
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IELTS essay the country's economic proplems

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