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City dwellers do not tend to develop close relationships with their neighbours.

City dwellers do not tend to develop close relationships with their neighbours. aALKP
Because of technology, especially metropolitan residents prefer to online websites rather than interact with their neighbours, and as a result, their relationship bonding is weaking. This essay attempts to address the reasons as well as viable solutions. To commence with, there arw numerous reasons why people do not interact with one another. First and foremost, there is a lack of time which means that people nowadays do not have enough time to talk, play, or get to know their neighbours because of their hectic schedule. Also, people devote a great deal of time to their jobs, and when they have free time, they engage in a variety of activities as well as maintain their relationships with family members. To resolve it government should, organize a festival pr event so that people can attend and interact with their neighbors. Furthermore, it is responsibility of residents to spend some time with their neighbors as well as participate in some activities so that they can learn about their neighbor's like and dislikes. Another fact is that people nowadays are accustomed to technology. To be more precise it, they spend a lot of time in front of the laptop television and other gadgets as a result of which they do not socialise with others and stay at home all the time. Moreover rather than interact they always prefee social programs for communication. To curb it, people should take participate in several activities which can play with neighbours in the ground and also these games can boost confidence, felling of brotherhood as well as friendship among locals. To conclude, gadgets ate useful as well as they can spend free time with mobile phones and so on but individuals should maintain relationships with neighbours because ir is thought of people neighbours areright arm of every home as they do help any situations before relatives.
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interact
with their
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neighbours
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as a result
, their relationship bonding is
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weaking
. This essay attempts to address the reasons as
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as viable solutions. To commence with, there
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arw
numerous reasons why
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people
do not
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interact
with one another.
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and foremost, there is a lack of
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time
which means that
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people
nowadays do not have
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enough
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time
to talk, play, or
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get
to know their
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neighbours
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because
of their hectic schedule.
Also
,
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people
devote a great deal of
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time
to their jobs, and when they have free
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time
, they engage in a variety of activities as
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well
as maintain their relationships with family members. To resolve it
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government
should, organize a festival pr
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event
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so
that
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people
can attend and
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interact
with their neighbors.
Furthermore
, it is responsibility of residents to spend
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some
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time
with their neighbors as
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well
as participate in
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some
activities
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so
that they can learn about their neighbor's like and dislikes. Another fact is that
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people
nowadays
are accustomed
to technology. To be more precise it, they spend
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a lot of
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time
in front of the laptop television and other gadgets
as a result
of which they do not
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socialise
with others and stay at home all the
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time
.
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rather
than
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interact
they always
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prefee
social programs for communication. To curb it,
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people
should take participate in several activities which can play with
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neighbours
in the ground and
also
these games can boost confidence, felling of brotherhood as
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well
as friendship among locals.
To conclude
, gadgets ate useful as
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well
as they can spend free
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time
with mobile phones and
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so
on
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but
individuals should maintain relationships with
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neighbours
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ir
is
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of
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people
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neighbours
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areright
arm of every home as they do
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help
any situations
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before
relatives.
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IELTS essay City dwellers do not tend to develop close relationships with their neighbours.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
308 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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