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Describe a famous person who you like or admire

Describe a famous person who you like or admire nNGYE
We all have our favourite personalities whom we respect and love from the bottom of our heart. While some of them are friends and family whom we meet almost every day, a few of them are renowned people. One such famous person whom I greatly admire is Tursunoy Sadikova one of the greatest poetess and writer. She was amiable, soft spoken woman. I have read many of her books. I really mention that all her books were programming for my life. I admire for her contributions, advise and skills. She always spoke about social life and could give some useful advise or instructions for each person. She was born in Andijan. People of this place are excessive amiable. So her character is soft like her countrymates.
We all have our
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favourite
personalities whom we respect and
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love
from the bottom of our heart. While
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some
of them are friends and family whom we
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meet
almost every day, a few of them
are renowned
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people
. One such
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famous
person whom I
greatly
admire is
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Tursunoy
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Sadikova
one of the greatest poetess and writer. She was amiable,
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soft spoken
woman. I have read
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many
of her books. I
really
mention that all her books were programming for my life.
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I
admire for her contributions, advise and
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skills
. She always spoke about social life and could give
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some
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useful
advise or instructions for each person. She
was born
in
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Andijan
.
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People
of this place are excessive amiable.
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So
her character is soft like her
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countrymates
.

IELTS essay Describe a famous person who you like or admire

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
126 words
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4.0
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