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the costs of intrnational travel are decresing and tourism is growing . what are the advantages and diadvantages.

the costs of intrnational travel are decresing and tourism is growing. what are the advantages and diadvantages. OVwL7
It is true that the cost of traveling oversaea has become chepar these day and it has growing the tourism industry in many nation's. the growth of tourism industry has own marits and demarits and the following essay will discuss them in details. From a number of reason, the advancement in tourism industry brings lot of benifits for countries. firstly, it creats lot of job opportunities for local people. as many hotel and restaurent built along
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has become
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chepar
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these day
and it has growing the tourism industry in
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nation's
.
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the
growth of tourism industry has
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own
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marits
and
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demarits
and the following essay will discuss them in
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details
.

From a number of reason, the

advancement in tourism industry brings
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lot of
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benifits
for countries.
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firstly
, it
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creats
lot of job opportunities

for local
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people
.
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as
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many hotel
and
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restaurent
built
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along

IELTS essay the costs of intrnational travel are decresing and tourism is growing. what are the advantages and diadvantages.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
75 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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