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Some people think that giving gift and present to friends and family is important to show them that we care .other think that there are more important aays .discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that giving gift and present to friends and family is important to show them that we care. other think that there are more important aays. Kw3X0
Gifts are token of love. it is argued that careness can be shown by giving presents to others while some ween that there are some different crucial ways to show love and affection towarda near and dear. I firmly agree with the later statement and would present both views in impending paragraph. firstly, this essay will discuss that showing love thru gifts are best ways. secondly, there are different ways of showing care to others
Gifts are token of
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love
.
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it
is argued
that
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careness
can
be shown
by giving presents to others while
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some
ween that there are
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some
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different
crucial ways to
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show
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love
and affection
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towarda
near and dear. I
firmly
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agree
with the later statement and would present both views in impending paragraph.
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firstly
, this essay will discuss that showing
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love
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thru
gifts
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are best
ways.
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secondly
, there are
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different
ways of showing care to others

IELTS essay Some people think that giving gift and present to friends and family is important to show them that we care. other think that there are more important aays.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
74 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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