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increasing the price of petrol is the best way to control growing traffic and pollution problem. what extent do you agree with the statement? what are the measures that might be taken?

increasing the price of petrol is the best way to control growing traffic and pollution problem. what extent what are the measures that might be taken? Lr3Or
For completing traffic and pollution problem is the key method by some to increase the price of fossil fuel, for instance petrol, which can reduce this means. While i belive that increasing petrol price is not necessary to cope up pollution problem, I do not agree that rising the price of petrol as the best means. To begin with,
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that increasing petrol price is not necessary to cope up pollution problem, I do not
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IELTS essay increasing the price of petrol is the best way to control growing traffic and pollution problem. what extent what are the measures that might be taken?

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  American English
2 paragraphs
59 words
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4.0
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