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Defrostation is a serious problem facing our environment nowadays,discuss its causes and solutions suggested for this problem.

Defrostation is a serious problem facing our environment nowadays, discuss its causes and solutions suggested for this problem. jRDNw
Deforestation is rising nowadays by an enormous amount. Particulary logging is the main reason that makes people do alot of felling processes, and thus furthermore leads to serious harms to our surrounding environment. Firstly, I will discuss the most fundmental problem which is the climate change. The prescence of trees and rainforests in our planet has an vital role in climate regulation. For instance respiration done by trees' leaves affects air humidity, and consequently air temperature. Also absence of trees may increase the issue called green house or in other words global warming.
Deforestation is rising nowadays by an enormous amount.
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logging is the main reason that
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makes
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people
do
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alot
of felling processes, and
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leads to serious harms to our surrounding environment.

Firstly
, I will discuss the most
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fundmental
problem which is the climate
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change
. The
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prescence
of trees and rainforests in our planet has
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vital role in climate regulation.
For instance
respiration done by trees'
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leaves
affects air humidity, and
consequently
air temperature.
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Also
absence of trees may increase the issue called green
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house
or
in other words
global warming.
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IELTS essay Defrostation is a serious problem facing our environment nowadays, discuss its causes and solutions suggested for this problem.

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