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The coronavirus pandemic has disrupted our lives and forever changed many aspects of our lives.What are those aspects and how have they changed?Is it for the better or worse?

The coronavirus pandemic has disrupted our lives and forever changed many aspects of our lives. What are those aspects and how have they changed? Is it for the better or worse? 0jj5
The major countries have suffered a lot due to the coronavirus. The effects of coronavirus on human beings are for longer period of time. To stay safe against the coronavirus pandemic, it has changed our lives in many ways. I agree to take these changes in the positive ways in our lives. The first benefit of coronavirus pandemic is to maintain social distance. Since coronavirus is transferring from one person to another person by means of physical touch or virus can transmitted through air also. For instance, public trasport in bus, the drive needs to restrict number of persons in the bus as well all travelers need to sit apart maximum 6ft distance from each other. Certainly to limit number of person in public bus is more convenient for travelers. Likewise before coronavirus pandemic all the seats of public bus used to be occupied and moreover many people are standing throughout the journey. Conversely, transportation in bus was not comfortable for public to travel. (if a person organise birthday party for his child, he has to be strict to follow government guideline. So, the number of people need to restrict in social gathering in function. )In addition, the coronavirus is community transfer if infected person may come in contact with other person, then all the people get infected. The second positive change is the healthy food habit. Eating fresh and hygienic food is better to fight against coronavirus; however, it helps to increase our immunity level. For example, the people need to take more vitamin C fruits and vegetables like oranges, spinach, beans etc. These vegetables increase stamina in their body. In Contrast, the coronavirus affects badly to the infected person’s body parts like kidney and lungs. Furthermore, due to healthy and hygienic food habit, people are avoiding outside food from restaurant or any street food. They became more conscious about their hygiene; however, they rarely visit the restaurant than previously coronavirus pandemic. In conclusion, the changes for reducing coronavirus infections are taken place for betterment of our lives. As a result these changes are good for future. Indeed, it is for ourselves after pandemic of the coronavirus. The major countries have suffered a lot due to the coronavirus. The effects of coronavirus on human beings are for longer period of time. To stay safe against the coronavirus pandemic, it has changed our lives in many ways. I agree to take these changes in the positive ways in our lives. The first benefit of coronavirus pandemic is to maintain social distance. Since coronavirus is transferring from one person to another person by means of physical touch or virus can transmitted through air also. For instance, public transport in bus, the drive needs to restrict number of persons in the bus as well all travelers need to sit apart maximum 6ft distance from each other. Certainly to limit number of person in public bus is more convenient for travelers. Likewise previously coronavirus pandemic all the seats of public bus used to be occupied and moreover many people are standing throughout the journey. Conversely, transportation in bus was not comfortable for public to travel. (if a person organize birthday party for his child, he has to be strict to follow government guideline. So, the number of people need to restrict in social gathering in function. )In addition, the coronavirus is community transfer if infected person may come in contact with other person, then all the people get infected. The second positive change is the healthy food habit. Eating fresh and hygienic food is better to fight against coronavirus; however, it helps to increase our immunity level. For example, the people need to take more vitamin C fruits and vegetables like oranges, spinach, beans etc. These vegetables increase stamina in their body. In Contrast, the coronavirus affects badly to the infected person’s body parts like kidney and lungs. Furthermore, due to healthy and hygienic food habit, people are avoiding outside food from restaurant or any street food. They became more conscious about their hygiene; however, they rarely visit restaurant after coronavirus pandemic. In conclusion, the changes for reducing coronavirus infections are taken place for betterment of our lives. As a result these changes are good for future. Indeed, it is for ourselves after pandemic of the coronavirus.
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is better to fight against coronavirus;
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increase
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people
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need
to take more vitamin C fruits and
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vegetables
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increase
stamina in their
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body
.
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, the coronavirus affects
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to the
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infected
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person’s
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body
parts like kidney and lungs.
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to
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healthy
and
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people
are avoiding outside
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. They became more conscious about their hygiene;
however
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than previously coronavirus pandemic.

In conclusion
, the
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changes
for reducing coronavirus infections
are taken
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lives
.
As a result
these
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for future.
Indeed
, it is for ourselves after pandemic of the coronavirus.

The major countries have suffered a lot
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due
to the coronavirus. The effects of coronavirus on human beings are for longer period of time. To stay safe against the coronavirus pandemic, it has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
our
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lives
in
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many
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ways
. I
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agree
to take these
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changes
in the
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positive
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ways
in our
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lives
.

The
first
benefit of coronavirus pandemic is to maintain
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social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
distance
. Since coronavirus is transferring from one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
to another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
by means of physical touch or virus can transmitted through air
also
.
For instance
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
transport in bus, the drive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
needs
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restrict
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
number
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
persons
in the bus
as well
all
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travelers
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need
to sit apart maximum
Writing for an international audience? Consider adding the metric equivalent.
6ft
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distance
from each
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other
.
Certainly
to limit
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number
of
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person
in
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public
bus is more convenient for
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travelers
.
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Likewise
previously coronavirus pandemic all the seats of
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public
bus
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used
to
be occupied
and
moreover
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many
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people
are standing throughout the journey.
Conversely
, transportation in bus was not comfortable for
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public
to travel. (if a
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person
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organize
birthday party for his child, he
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has to
be strict to follow
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government
guideline.
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So
, the
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number
of
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people
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need
to
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restrict
in
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social
gathering in function.
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)
In addition
, the coronavirus is community transfer if
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infected
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person
may
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come
in contact with
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other
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person
, then all the
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people
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get
infected.

The second
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positive
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change
is the
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healthy
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food
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
habit
. Eating fresh and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hygienic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
is better to fight against coronavirus;
however
, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increase
our immunity level.
For example
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to take more vitamin C fruits and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vegetables
like oranges, spinach, beans etc. These
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vegetables
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
increase
stamina in their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
body
.
In Contrast
, the coronavirus affects
badly
to the
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infected
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person’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
body
parts like kidney and lungs.
Furthermore
,
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due
to
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healthy
and
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hygienic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
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habit
,
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people
are avoiding outside
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food
from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
or any street
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
. They became more conscious about their hygiene;
however
, they rarely visit
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
after coronavirus pandemic.

In conclusion
, the
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changes
for reducing coronavirus infections
are taken
place for betterment of our
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lives
.
As a result
these
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changes
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for future.
Indeed
, it is for ourselves after pandemic of the coronavirus.
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IELTS essay The coronavirus pandemic has disrupted our lives and forever changed many aspects of our lives. What are those aspects and how have they changed? Is it for the better or worse?

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714 words
5.5
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