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THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF WATER USED FOR DIFFERENT PURPOSES IN SIX AREAS OF THE WORLD.

THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF WATER USED FOR DIFFERENT PURPOSES IN SIX AREAS OF THE WORLD. Nl5lg
The supplied pie chart depicts the comparison of water consumption percentage over three diverse usage fields by four assorted continents and two subregions. Overall, it is explicit that water utilization in the Agricultural sphere has been recorded by far the highest proportion in South America, Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia. By contrast, it is interesting to note that in as following the same case the highest water usage percentage has been enumerated as Industrial use in North America and Europe. Looking at the chart in more detail, the percentage of water which has been expended immensely due to irrigation system in agriculture by Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia displays respectively 84, 88, and 81 numerations, that has captured two-thirds part of total consumption. Furthermore, South America water spending proportion pursues as well as a near result by 71. On the other side in North America and Europa continents, Industrial use holds the majority of overall statistics with 48% and 53%. Nevertheless, previously mentioned continents still keep almost a third of water usage in agricultural areas. As is presented in the given bar chart, enough water tonnage has not been supplied in domestic use both represented continents and subregions. While South America, North America, and Europe share a close percentage more or less one in ten out of 100, these have been indicated even two time less in the rest of the three regions.
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, it is explicit that
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utilization in the Agricultural sphere has
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by far the highest proportion in South America, Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia. By contrast, it is interesting to note that in as following the same case the highest
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in North America and Europe.

Looking at the chart in more detail, the
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spending proportion pursues
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, Industrial
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holds the majority of
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almost a third of
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usage in agricultural areas.

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tonnage has not
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both represented
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and subregions. While South America, North America, and Europe share a close
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more or less one in ten out of 100, these have
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even two time less in the rest of the three regions.
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IELTS essay THE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF WATER USED FOR DIFFERENT PURPOSES IN SIX AREAS OF THE WORLD.

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