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the change of a town now and in a plan

the change of a town now and in a plan mWAE8
due to the plan, a circular road that goes around the city center. This road expected to be built as a dual carriageway. The middle part of the main road is planned to be pedestrianised. Although the southern part of Islip is not having big changes other than some new housing and a downsize of the park, there are many changes planned for the northern part. Shops in this part will be demolished and a shopping centre and a housing area will be introduced. A bus station and a parking area are also planned to be built to the west and the east of the shopping centre, respectively.
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due
to the plan, a circular road that goes around the city center. This road
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expected
to
be built
as a dual carriageway. The middle
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part
of the main road
is planned
to be
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pedestrianised
. Although the southern
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part
of
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Islip
is not having
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big
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changes
other than
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some
new housing and
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a downsize
of the park, there are
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many
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changes
planned for the northern
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part
. Shops in this
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part
will
be demolished
and a shopping
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centre
and a housing area will
be introduced
. A bus station and a parking area are
also
planned to
be built
to the west and the east of the shopping
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centre
,
respectively
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IELTS essay the change of a town now and in a plan

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
108 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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