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Learning English as the first language

Learning English as the first language Pg1wK
I believe that is very difficult to learn any type of language that is different from your native one. Although many people believe that grammar is the most difficult point, In my perspective pronunciation is the most challenging. Because the grammar is quite similar to Portuguese while pronunciation is not. One point that is totally different from English to Portuguese is the way that we do essays, in Portuguese we never talk in the first person while in English we always do that, we need to have a strong voice and opinion to create a great essay. moving on to the last question I can say that the internet is the best way to learn and make some researches about learning English. In addition, I am very fond of books, both are very helpful to learn English, however, I can't leave without the internet.
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difficult to learn any type of language
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believe that grammar is the most difficult point, In my perspective pronunciation is the

most challenging.
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Because
the grammar is quite similar to Portuguese while pronunciation is not. One point
that is
totally
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different
from English to Portuguese is the way that we do essays, in Portuguese

we never talk in the
first
person while in English we always do that, we need to have a strong voice and opinion to create a great essay.
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moving
on to the last question I can say that the internet is the best way to learn and
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researches about learning English.
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fond of books, both are
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helpful to learn English,
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, I can't
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leave
without the internet.

IELTS essay Learning English as the first language

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
144 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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