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the celarium of The Colosseum

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The Colosseum had a fabric cover (velarium in Latin) made up of many sheets that covered the stands of the spectators but left the central arena uncovered. The velarium was used to protect people from the sun and was operated by a detachment of sailors from the fleet of Miseno, stationed next to the Colosseum. The sheets were fixed with a complex system of ropes and guided by pulleys and at the same time the entire structure was fixed to the ground with ropes tied to stone blocks placed outside the Colosseum, and in part still visible today.
The Colosseum had a fabric cover (
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velarium
in Latin) made up of
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many
sheets that covered the stands of the spectators
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but
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left
the central arena uncovered. The
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velarium
was
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used
to protect
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people
from the sun and
was operated
by a detachment of sailors from the fleet of
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Miseno
, stationed
next
to the Colosseum.
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The
sheets were
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fixed
with a complex system of ropes and guided by pulleys and at the same time the entire structure was
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fixed
to the ground with ropes tied to stone blocks placed outside the Colosseum, and in part
still
visible
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today
.

IELTS essay the celarium of The Colosseum

Essay
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1 paragraphs
98 words
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