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The Cambodia government should force everyone to wear a mask until a Coronavirus vaccine is made. Do you agreed or disagree?

The Cambodia government should force everyone to wear a mask until a Coronavirus vaccine is made. Do you agreed or disagree? jdoVd
The government should constrain everyone in Cambodian to put the mask on until the coronavirus vaccine is created. I strongly agree that everyone ought to put the mask on until the vaccine is made. This essay will prove why wearing masks is significant during this pandemic. Firstly, wearing masks is needed during this pandemic in order to keep ourselves and the world safe. The main value of wearing masks is not only to protect ourselves but other people too. For instance, if the person wearing the mask is unknowingly infected, wearing masks might reduce the chance of them passing the virus on others. But there are still a bunch of people who don’t care much about this issue which make them not wear masks. In this case, they should be forced to wear masks or the virus will keep spreading from person to person. Secondly, wearing a mask is one of the ways to stop the virus from spreading. As long as the vaccine hasn't been made there isn’t any way to stop the virus from spreading, besides having the social distanced and wearing masks. The positive cases keep increasing and death cases keep happening. But if people wear masks together, have social distances and listen to the governments which said 3 protections, 3 don’t. believe that the positive case will decrease and people won’t have died this much too
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government
should constrain everyone in Cambodian to put the
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mask
on until the coronavirus vaccine
is created
. I
strongly
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agree
that everyone ought to put the
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mask
on until the vaccine
is made
. This essay will prove why wearing
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masks
is significant during this pandemic.

Firstly
, wearing
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masks
is needed
during this pandemic in order to
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keep
ourselves and the world safe. The main value of wearing
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masks
is not
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only
to protect ourselves
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but
other
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people
too.
For instance
, if the person wearing the
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mask
is
unknowingly
infected, wearing
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masks
might
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reduce
the chance of them passing the
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virus
on others.
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there are
still
a bunch of
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people
who don’t care much about this issue which
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make
them not wear
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masks
.
In this case
, they should
be forced
to wear
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masks
or the
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virus
will
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keep
spreading from person to person.

Secondly
, wearing a
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mask
is one of the ways to
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stop
the
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virus
from spreading. As long as the vaccine hasn't
been made
there isn’t any way to
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stop
the
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virus
from spreading,
besides
having the social distanced and wearing
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masks
. The
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positive
cases
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keep
increasing and death cases
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keep
happening.
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if
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people
wear
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masks
together, have social distances and listen to the
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governments
which said 3 protections, 3 don’t.
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believe
that the
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positive
case will decrease and
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people
won’t have
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died
this much
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IELTS essay The Cambodia government should force everyone to wear a mask until a Coronavirus vaccine is made. Do you agreed or disagree?

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3 paragraphs
229 words
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