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The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Their are various ways of exploring a city or any touristic sites. Some people prefer to go around on their own while some find it easier to travel in group along with a guide. As far as my view is concerned it depends on the place or situation for a say if I'm at any historical place i always want guide on my side or when i know I'm in a chaotic place or populated destination i always prefer to travel with guide in large groups but when it comes to the relaxing vacation in hill stations or on beaches i need peace for that reason i stay away from guides and groups. Travelling in groups can save you a few bucks but you will not get any freedom to do what you actually wanted to do, same goes for the guides. One thing i can assure you is that if you really wanted to travel with guide or in the company of others, Europe is the place you should go to. Their are plenty of reasons to visit the Europe but one i love the most is thier history. Europe is the richest continent in history and travelling their in groups with local guides you will get to know unknown or hidden things about history of the Europe
Their
are various ways of exploring a city or any touristic sites.
Some
people
prefer to go around on their
own
while
some
find it easier to travel in
group
along with a guide.

As far as my view
is concerned
it depends on the
place
or situation for a say if I'm at any historical
place
i
always want
guide
on my side or when
i
know I'm in a chaotic
place
or populated destination
i
always prefer to travel with
guide
in large
groups
but
when it
comes
to the relaxing vacation in hill stations or on beaches
i
need peace for that reason
i
stay away from
guides
and groups.

Travelling in
groups
can save you a few bucks
but
you will not
get
any freedom to do what you actually wanted to do, same goes for the guides.

One thing
i
can assure you is that if you
really
wanted to travel with
guide
or in the
company
of others, Europe is the
place
you should go to.
Their
are
plenty
of reasons to visit the Europe
but
one
i
love
the most is
thier
history. Europe is the richest continent in history and travelling their in
groups
with local
guides
you will
get
to know unknown or hidden things about history of the
Europe
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IELTS essay The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. with this statement?

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